Bite sized reading

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last posted Sept. 17, 2017, 7:33 p.m.

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  • The Lipstick Pastor by Tomi Makanjuola. This was quite rambly and could have done with quite a lot more editing. There were quite a few places where it wasn't clear who was speaking, and the viewpoint jumped around quite a lot too. Often the words were... not quite the right ones, e.g. the first page describes walls being painted with "orthopaedic paint". I wish it had been better edited, because it could have been a much better book if it had.

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